I would have liked the plot better explained because I’m left with questions of like why did ole boy have soo much anger towards the main characters, was the video their smoking gun, was ole boy blackmailing ole girl, etc. 
also to me India came off a little thirsty at times which could have been due to her lack of experience. 
Overall, the book was really good & cute. I loved the banter between Zahi & Zayne & Orion.