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The Price of Revenge by Dominique Davis
2.75
fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I could not stop reading once I began. It was so easy to get attached to the main character, Whit. 

The main reason for my rating is that the novel often read less like a story that was unfolding in real time, and more like a list of political certainties. While I 100% agree with all those certainties, I wanted to experience Whit reaching them rather than her rattling them off as if they were self-evident and obvious. I wanted to see Whit growing into her own truth.

The novel begins with a dedication to survivors who shatter the "perfect victim" trope, but it ends up becoming another kind of a perfect survivor: someone who has no self-doubt, no shadows in her sense of self. Even when Whit messes up, she is not really messed up. So: I could not grow into this story with her.