The perspective meanders in a way that might bug some people, but I actually quite liked how the story is told. The connective tissue of her past in memories and what is currently happening jives with my own experiences. Sometimes things are explained with granular detail, sometimes they feel ephemeral and floaty. It’s interesting to see what “matters” to her or impacts her. The only weak point for me is that a more punctuated theme might have drawn the collection of thoughts together a bit better.