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loverofromance 's review for:
Alpha's Unclaimed Mate
by Gertty Rudraw
My Review:
I really struggled with this one here, and I rarely find indie paranromal romance to be well written and this type of story just shows how much indie PNR needs to be edited and more polished. I was curious by the setup and see how the "secret baby" aspect was handled. And I have to say it was handled so badly. I wish it wasn't the case, but this is why this trope shouldn't be written by certain individuals. My main issues with this story is that that couple is hardly together throughout the story. They both treat each other pretty horribly and I battled with the heroine. Yes the hero did have a need to grovel. But the way she treated him was worse in my opinion. And how she treats her own child---Man I wanted to strangle her for it. . I just can't in good conscious recommend this book or this author even. The writing style really needed a good editor as well. Overall it had very little to recommend it other than enjoying the flashbacks of when they were kids together.
I really struggled with this one here, and I rarely find indie paranromal romance to be well written and this type of story just shows how much indie PNR needs to be edited and more polished. I was curious by the setup and see how the "secret baby" aspect was handled. And I have to say it was handled so badly. I wish it wasn't the case, but this is why this trope shouldn't be written by certain individuals. My main issues with this story is that that couple is hardly together throughout the story. They both treat each other pretty horribly and I battled with the heroine. Yes the hero did have a need to grovel. But the way she treated him was worse in my opinion. And how she treats her own child---Man I wanted to strangle her for it. . I just can't in good conscious recommend this book or this author even. The writing style really needed a good editor as well. Overall it had very little to recommend it other than enjoying the flashbacks of when they were kids together.