The romance wasn't believable to me. The hero even points out they knew each other for a total of 5 months and one week, with a ten-year break. Then he also says he knows her better than anyone else? That really just doesn't track at all. Plus the adventure was super contrived and difficult to follow along to since everything was so out of left field. Smaller gripe, but I just can't get over it, who has sex that many times when they're out in the middle of the desert and have gotten as gross as they have after days on the trail?