Ahoy me mateys! I recently reviewed the Yesterday’s Kin trilogy in me 3 Bells segment and very much enjoyed it. The First Mate and I were discussing her writing and he told me about beggars in spain, a Hugo and Nebula winning novella back in 1991. I was very intrigued by the idea of people who didn’t sleep and so I thought I would give it a try. This is actually the novel that expanded on the ideas of the novella.What this book seemed to suggest is that the author has a theme of genetic testing/research being a method for changing the fundamentals of human society. Those themes were lightly present in the other trilogy I read as well.

In this novel, it starts with following Leisha Camden whose father decides to genetic modify his daughter in vitro in order to make her have a longer lifespan, excellent health, and the ability to not need sleep. Unbeknownst to him, his wife also decides to keep an unmodified child as well. While the twin girls share a birthday, their fundamental differences make them lead completely different lives. The juxtaposition of the two is fascinating.

But the author doesn’t stop there. She also explores the questions of how the Sleepless population changes society. Except it doesn’t go the way ye think. Sleepless end up being a marginalized population while also being fundamental to Earth’s functioning on many levels. I would have thought that people would fight to have such advantages for their children. I enjoyed that the author kept me guessing in terms of ramifications of the genetic switches.

The novel does follow subsequent decades of Leisha’s life and reflects most of the commentary through her eyes. That said, the world does branch out with the use of different perspectives as the time progresses. It is broken up into four parts in over eighty years. This is where part of the flaw of the book came for me. I just didn’t like where the story diverged.

The Sleepless are bound in a philosophical war with one sect being a faction that wants to remove itself from regular society and found its own nation-state. I found a lot of this part of the plot to be rather lackluster and boring. The bad girl, Jennifer Sharifi, is too cliche and stereotypical and was frankly annoying. This conflict ends up being the majority of the second half of the book and I just didn’t care.

In fact most of the characterizations of this novel were starkly in the black or white categories. I would have liked more shades of grey and nuances. I absolutely hated the entire “dreaming” subplot with Drew. I didn’t like the plot points around that topic and despised the his character. I did like the Sleepless’ continued foray into genetic testing and especially the introduction of the next phase of humanity. Miri, a Super, and her compatriots were lovely.

I think that overall the ideas were better than the execution. While I did enjoy it, I do not see meself picking up the rest of this trilogy. I think readers interested in these ideas could just pick up the novella and have a potential better reading experience with none of the drawbacks of this novel. Arrr!

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