I've read the patreon version which is, I suppose, an unedited one—and the book would be highly improved by edits, especially in the second half. It was way too long and dealt with too many unnecessary things; if it were cut in half, I would be pleased.

That said, I liked this installment probably the best. The funniest and most enjoyable one was the second book, but this one had the most interesting main character in the whole series. It was hurt/comfort at its best, with as much hurt as I could take without being too graphic or disgusting, and lots of comfort afterward. I've already reread the getting-together scene several times, it was perfect.

My only complaint, apart from the length, was about the sex scenes—they were somewhat out of character (esp. that spanking dialogue) and frankly unnecessary.