Not my thing.

Way Way Way too graphic and not much plot either. It says it's the first in a series but it's obvious that it's part of a much larger series of series because there are background characters referred to and you know they're meant to be important but there's nothing to really make you care about them in the text.

This felt like PWP and it wasn't even characters I already knew so it fell very flat.

The writing was very amateurish at best, you are told things like "and then he grew up and became an actor and a writer" and there's no craft to it at all, the characters fall flat without any significant development. It feels like a half hearted attempt to give backstory to some characters in an RPG.