While fun, the pace seemed too fast or inconsistent? How long was she there for? A week? Before she thought she was in love? There wasn't a lot of mention of how much time had passed in parts of the story either, so I kept assuming it had only been days or the next day. So... They fell madly in love in less than a month? In Regency(?) England?
Also, his name is Micah. How hard is it to call him that? It bothered me ALOT that she kept calling him Mike.