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Onyx Storm by Rebecca Yarros
3.5
adventurous challenging emotional funny sad tense medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

I'll start with a non-spoilery review. I felt like there were SO many repeated lines in this book, I think this was originally going to be part of Iron Flame until Rebecca switched the series from a trilogy to a 5 book series. She did have a lot of focus on the main group, especially one fan favorite outside of Violet & Xaden which leading into them, there was a lot of just the same back and forth that at this point is getting tiresome.
Also if I read that Violet's skin was "so soft" one more time my eye was going to permanently stay twitching.

There isn't a ton of drama or action until the last like 25% of the book, but once it starts it's hard to walk away from (like staying up until 2am on a school night type of can't walk away 😅). I did absolutely cry at one part and almost cried at a couple others but the presentation of the scene just wasn't quite there. There were a lot of actual "laugh out loud" moments for me though! 

Now onto the spoilery bits.

Turn back now

If your still reading it's at your own risk

I warned youuu 

*SPOILERS*
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I'm sorry almost all of these sound like I hate the book - these are just my genuine feelings when I was reading. 

1) I was so sick of hearing how almost every chapter she woke up read a lot, weilded a lot, sparred and went to bed. It was just recycled a little too often.

2) I don't feel like Halden was really needed for jelousy.. like how would she have dated a PRINCE?! (No offense to Violet).

3) Papa Aetos is another charecter that i was confused about, like he was supposed to add some kind of drama but he really only stepped in like twice to make things difficult and then disappeared?? I thought he would succeed in actually keeping them apart for longer.

4) F*ck the irids- they were mean to my baby Adarna?! Also what was the point in her leaving? And what was the point in her return? And don't take that the wrong way, I was SO glad for her return but it felt...forced?

5) Heck you to the TikToker who absolutely spoiled the ending for so many people, I wanted to feel more shock about the end but I put the pieces together too quick

6) Speaking of which, there were a few parts that I was feeling "uh hello? Violet? How are you not putting this together and I have?!".

7) Girl your brain does not race faster than Tairn can fly and suggesting so is just going to get him to list his whole family in a long, long lecture.

8) I know I mentioned in the non-spoilers how sick I was of hearing "your skin is so soft" but I can't stress it enough.

9) Another thing that bothered me, scratch that, gave me the ICK was, for example Devarro (sp?) is talking about flying in clouds and the Violet is all '"I do" fuck I just said that" ??? Why act all angsty after saying something like that, chill out. And that's not the first time she would do that. It also bothered me when she'd be like "I know the answer but I don't want to be right" it made her look like a pompous ass...

11) I was actually really glad Ridoc got more scene time, him and his dragon are hilarious!

10) *Insert Klaus yelling REBECCA meme* What do you mean I have to wait a year/YEARS FOR THE NEXT BOOK AFTER THAT CLIFF HANGER!!!!! 😫