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Playboy Pilot by Penelope Ward, Vi Keeland
4.0

Cute story, and I loved the characters.

The fight was a little much - she kind of blew everything out of the water, but I understood where she was coming from I guess. But I mean, give the man a chance??


One thing that often bothers me about the books in this series of novels is that there's a lot of long confessions/speeches that are supposed to move me I think? But they don't. No one talks like that in my world, so it seems a little silly to me. Also, near the end, they always do this summary type thing that sounds like a narrative over a movie and I don't like it. It's suppose to wrap up the book nicely, but it loses my attention instead.

As a whole, I enjoyed it, but the writing is what loses a star for me.