DNF 52%.
I hardly ever DNF books because I have a compulsion to finish everything. So in addition to the first 52%, I also read the last chapter and epilogue because I still needed to know how it ended.

Anyway here are my reasons for DNFing:
1. Cringey and repetitive dialogue.

"You're thinking so loud, Ro. There'll be time to talk, but right now, we have to show you how much we want you with us."
"Yes." Sy begins to speak, breaking the trance of Evan's kiss. "Let us show you how much we want you with us, yeah?"
What else can I say? It's an easy question to answer. "Yes! Please show me how much you want me with you two."

2. Pet names that didn't work for me. Example: "my nerdy babe"
3. Excessive full-naming. So many people are full-naming people all the time! and with first, middle, and hyphenated last names that is ... too much.

"You get lippy with me anymore, Sylas Reagan Pierson-North, I swear you'll only watch tonight."

and then a couple sentences later...

"Sylas Reagan Pierson-North, cinnamon rolls."

4. You cannot talk with a cock in the mouth. Especially not multiple sentences. I will die on this hill.

"Wanna come in my mouth, Red? I'm pretty sure I can make you come again with my dick in your ass." He asks with my cock still in his mouth, and it's so hot.

and that's not the only example of this.

Merged review:

DNF 52%.
I hardly ever DNF books because I have a compulsion to finish everything. So in addition to the first 52%, I also read the last chapter and epilogue because I still needed to know how it ended.

Anyway here are my reasons for DNFing:
1. Cringey and repetitive dialogue.

"You're thinking so loud, Ro. There'll be time to talk, but right now, we have to show you how much we want you with us."
"Yes." Sy begins to speak, breaking the trance of Evan's kiss. "Let us show you how much we want you with us, yeah?"
What else can I say? It's an easy question to answer. "Yes! Please show me how much you want me with you two."

2. Pet names that didn't work for me. Example: "my nerdy babe"
3. Excessive full-naming. So many people are full-naming people all the time! and with first, middle, and hyphenated last names that is ... too much.

"You get lippy with me anymore, Sylas Reagan Pierson-North, I swear you'll only watch tonight."

and then a couple sentences later...

"Sylas Reagan Pierson-North, cinnamon rolls."

4. You cannot talk with a cock in the mouth. Especially not multiple sentences. I will die on this hill.

"Wanna come in my mouth, Red? I'm pretty sure I can make you come again with my dick in your ass." He asks with my cock still in his mouth, and it's so hot.

and that's not the only example of this.