The writing in Next in Line for Love is fine, the story is okay, but I just didn't find the attraction believable and everything moved way too quickly for me to suspend my disbelief. Ali reads a hell of a lot more like a manipulative 20-something partier than the 35-year-old she's supposed to be for most of the book, and I found the connection between her and 53-year-old Jill pretty unbelievable.

It probably doesn't help that I'm not the biggest fan of age gap and I didn't realize going into it that this one was so large, and that may be coloring my view, but I just didn't feel any kind of real connection between the two. It also seemed totally unbelievable to me that Jill would have been willing to risk her long career for a fling with the company owner's daughter that she was mentoring. The steamy scenes were good at least.