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The Apartment by K.L. Slater
2.0
challenging mysterious medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: No

This fell so short and I really didn’t care for the reasoning behind all of this happening. The plot just felt really clunky. I hated how back and forth the story felt between POVs. It felt random to me and rushed. 

And do 5 year olds really speak like this? Skye seemed so aware, I kept forgetting that she was only 5 years old. The way that child spoke and interacted with people sometimes just felt like she was more around 7-10.