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Witchlings by Claribel A. Ortega
4.0
Plot or Character Driven: Plot
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes

This was so much fun to read!! Being able to read a story within a magic world that isn’t bigoted is always a plus, lol. Some of the twists and plot elements were predictable, and I’m sure even the younger readers could pick up on them ahead of time, but this still worked as a fantasy adventure. I’d like to see how the different parts of the magical world are expanded upon as the series progresses, even though we already got some worldbuilding in this one! 

And besides the plot being engaging, a lot of where this story shines is the main trio’s friendship! While initially they only agreed to try to become friends out of circumstance, their bond was endearing and I liked the “breaks” in the story where they could put aside their high-stakes mission to have some time to be kids. Plus, Seven’s friendship with Thorn and Valley gives her a way to move on from her previous relationships and grow as a person, something that I’d like to see more in middle grade!

Another thing I liked was how the adults were also an important part of the story. Seven sometimes has to ask for help from her parents or the town’s leaders, and I appreciate how that was encouraged! Kids shouldn’t be expected to solve or deal with everything on their own. (There was also a respectful scene where Seven got help for her friend that was being abused at home, and I think more kids should learn not just how to look for signs but how to step in and tell a trusted adult.)

Although, I thought the ending was a bit too happy, after everything. I’m not expecting tragedy in the slightest, but it felt like almost every problem was abruptly solved. But I also understand keeping the tone and story optimistic for the target demographic.