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Wickedly Dangerous by Deborah Blake
3.0

I wanted to like this book so much, but in the end I'm not even sure it deserve the 3 stars I'm giving it.

There is simply too many minor plot holes.

Like knowing who the bad guy is really early, in a small town where everyone knows everyone, and the bad guy has an actual job, and a persona, and is blending in with the locals but you (the very powerful witch) DON'T KNOW WHERE TO FIND THEM

Like.. SHOW UP AT THEIR WORK??? The entire book the MC was sitting in her trailer muttering about "it's war now" and "I'm not going to let this stand" and just sitting around waiting for something to happen when she KNEW WHERE THE BAD GUY WAS

There was no sleuthing, no spying, no following. Just sitting around proclaiming she doesn't know where the bad guy is when EVERY OTHER HUMAN KNOWS WHERE THE BAD GUYS IS! The bad guy got a job! IN A SMALL TOWN!

And lets not get started on this whole romance thing where the entire book it's "oh I have sexy feelings for this person but OH IM SO BROKEN"
"But lets
SpoilerPROPOSE AFTER ONE BANG
"

Oooohh how mad I was when Baba Yaga blows her fuse about "he never told me he was
Spoilerstill married
" like BITCH HE DIDNT SAY HE WAS
SpoilerDIVORCED EITHER! All he did say was that it ruined his marriage
and YOU DIDN'T ASK

But, no no, of course not.
SpoilerOne intercourse later and you're asking him to move in with you which both of you equal to getting engaged and where the hell is the logic in that? Why jump to that conclusion without even being asked? not to mention HOW IS HE GOING TO DIVORCE HIS WIFE when his wife isn't even on earth anymore??


I'm fuming just thinking about it