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Along the Path of Torment by Chandler Morrison
1.25
dark fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This is some real edge-lord bullshit. Dude tries really hard to be profound by using extreme violence, but there’s no substance here. Nothing is shocking because nothing is invested. This is just straight amateur.  The thinly-veiled devil character even quotes “Hotel California” for Christ’s sake. God damn. This reads like the typical misogynist garbage that the Jokerfied neck-beard in your MFA workshop submits every week to the sheeple who don’t understand his genius. It’s riddled with forced perversity to hide bad writing and shield the author from criticism because his readers “can’t handle” how extreme he is. Fuck this garbage and fuck me for actually finishing this pile of dreck.