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Finn Rhodes Forever by Stephanie Archer
2.0

I really hate second chance romances and this is a prime example of why. It's just not realistic for me to believe that he left at eighteen years old and ten years later, he's still in love with her? He basically also says he won't take no for an answer and he's going to MAKE her be with him. I'm sorry, but in the year 2023? Can we not? It was FAST too, like 30% in and they were already tlaking about the future so no real plot or conflict. Plus, the whole thing about her looking for the flower was pretty stupid. And again, the author needs to learn how to write mature 30 year olds, not adults that act like teenagers. I'm begging you.