Yep! Still pretty bad.

But a bit of a surprise not the worst thing I ever read. There are good moments, mostly relying on Peter and MJ's relationship and how they are there for each other. And the idea of Gwen having super babies is a weird one but could be intriguing as Peter gets to try to save one the way he couldn't before so that was nice.

But holy macaroni, you're going to make the father Norman? And on that of that have Gwen have sex with him simply because he was "tired and sad" and something "about him made her just...explode" like what in the fuck? Okay not exact quote, but it's just as nonsensical. I'm not against people making mistakes in fiction because in real life it happens far to often but no way, in any fucking universe, would Gwen ever sleep with Norman.

The plotline seemed to want to move quickly but spread out for a mystery. But you could just tell JMS wanted to move on as quick as possible the way he ended everything but summing it up in 22 pages after all is reveal. It's a bad story overall with a couple of good moments.

A 2 out of 5 at best.