ppcfransen 's review for:

2.0

I got this as an ebook in combination with another book, which I did not realize until I read END at about a third of the page count.

The story moves along quickly, but at around page 70 I started to wonder when the mystery was going to start. Some puzzles are presented, but they are solved within a few hours (without mention where the needle or even the hay stack was found). There was potential for a lot more mystery.

Author uses too many exclamation marks and doesn't seem to know that a dialogue tag is not capitalized, also not after ! and ?