I mean, I guess I got what I signed up for. It's not that I expected complicated plot or character development from a 80-page smut story, but it still managed to be kind of rushed and cliché. Instant lust is one thing, but confessing their love for each other after a day is a different matter. I also found the dialogue/dirty talk kind of lazy. And lastly, I'm not sure if it's true for the Amazon copy, but the Bookfunnel copy that I got had a lot of typos and missing punctuation.