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Pantomime by Laura Lam
2.0

content warnings:
Spoiler

rep:
Spoilerintersex queer/questioning (though not specified in-text, author says genderfluid & bi) MC,


★ 2.5 stars ★

This isn't bad, but apart from the MC being
Spoilerqueer/questioning: specifically intersex, genderfluid & bisexual
it's a fairly typical circus narrative — with some fantasy / mythology elements that gradually emerge and probably play a larger role as the series progresses.

Mostly I gave it a lower rating because the prose doesn't really work for me, so I wasn't particularly invested in the characters or interpersonal relationships or overall plot.

FRTC.

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CONVERSION: 6.73 / 15 = 2.5 stars

Prose: 4 / 10
Characters & Relationships: 5 / 10
Emotional Impact: 3 / 10
Development / Flow: 4 / 10
Setting: 6 / 10

Diversity & Social Themes: 3 / 5
Originality / Trope Execution: 2 / 5
Memorability: 2 / 5