This was a re-read for me. It’s been a long time between drinks and I forgot aspects of this book.
The story is great. It’s hot, it’s steamy, it’s great.
The editing, and the writing, are not. There are a TON of info dumps and at times the slips into second person, while can be great, aren’t here. The writing is a little awkward and stilted and the reasoning behind the “tension” here doesn’t really work for me.
Still, I enjoyed it, if for no other reason than it’s one of the few threesomes I’ve read done relatively well.