I was so excited for this one and was hooked immediately... and then I'm not sure what happened, it was choppy and repetitive. 
Twist 1 was so obvious to me that I have a hard time calling it a twist.
Twist 2... if there are no breadcrumbs at all and you just want to write in a twist it's sloppy. 
Or did I just completely miss the clues? You tell me.