hard to follow, tedious, unlikeable characters (ig that was the point maybe but i still hated it), lots of unanswered questions. also joan, you really don't have to use the f slur every chance you get. it's not cute, just stop k? the short chapters were its only redeemable quality cause it helped me get through it when otherwise i wouldn't be able to. i was either bored or confused the whole time. and maybe the short chapters contributed to my confusion cause it gave us snippets and i never really got the whole story. i felt like i was skipping chapters or something. i just couldn't follow this book. didn't like it at all.